I know the time is hard,
And, Fate is playing its card;
I promise this pain is ephemeral,
Because our Love is eternal.
The cloudy days will soon be past,
Smiles will adorn the lips at last;
I know it seems difficult though,
But, Love will make a path to flow.
The eclipse will soon be overcome by bright rays,
Let the patience tie knot with positive days;
I agree the journey ahead seems an ordeal,
But, Love will soon garner some zeal.
Let Love mature like Banyan Tree;
As you Grow old with me.
courtesy: shweta
9 comments:
I am always surprise to see all the youngsters penning poetry..whereas I could never rhyme two lines even:)
I love the last line the most...
Let Love mature like Banyan Tree;
As you Grow old with me.
Aaaaaaaahhhhhhh... I am in love with this line...
@ Renu: earlier i used to do Ctrl X/C + Ctrl V. Then gradually i became a good editor [copy paste is an art ;)] but later i developed an interest and thats how it all started. And as far as i hav understood from ma meagre experience, its no more about rhymes. rather its about a flow of thought. do give a try, m sure u will come up wid an excellent piece of work.
@ chanz: thnx dear. I think Banyan is the one of those creation of God which has a long life. So i thot, our Love should grow and fonder like a Banyan tree..
you said it and you got it.. :)
'The eclipse will soon be overcome by bright rays' I liked this line as it is full of positivity. :)
What a great resource!
good one..
fantastic!
@chandrika: thanks that u liked that... the bright rays are full of positive energy and they always provoke you to stop-not till the goal is reached.
@ sorcerer: welcome to my playground. Keep visiting.
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